A bit of art…

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Hard rock for others
Quicksand for herself
That’s what she’s been
She thinks - at least
Good friend to turn to
Ethics to scoff at

Shoulder to cry on
Friendship to count on
Then to switch off
Once they find love
No time to listen
To her anymore

Always too silent
Hoping that good friends
Will understand
Thoughts half spoken
Should they be able?
She always wonders

Never a bad word
Clinging to feelings
That seem long dead
But even so
There is a limit
To what she can bear

As she grows older
But none the wiser
Loyalties shift
Attitudes change
She stares in wonder
For here she stands - alone

21 Responses to “A bit of art…”

  1. [c]oma Says:

    melly, please cheer up :( the dutchies still like you!
    it’s not loyalties that shift, it’s priorities that shift… not being number one does not at all mean not being any one!

    /hug

  2. Melantrys Says:

    Dutchies! Always so self-centered…. ;)
    *hugs back*

    qztcdmo… an Atztek demo? Wonder what they used to protest for….?

    (Come oooooon, AnaRki, that one was good!!! :D )

  3. Granny Weatherwax Says:

    *hug* *hug* *hug* *hug*
    *pat* *pat* *pat* *pat-pat-pat*

    …rtotz?

  4. David Says:

    Is this a lament about someone living in Arnhem? There are a few friends that I miss too. I guess they grew up and away, but I didn’t.

    Had enough hugs yet? ;)
    olzlmf?

  5. David Says:

    Hey, who said your art sucked?! Now, put your art back up on the wall!

  6. Melantrys Says:

    I asked an opinion, and that was basically the answer I got.

    I’d rather put my boss up on the wall, you know, with a hammer and nails……..

    czgafzi - might be my mood today

  7. [c]oma Says:

    Art cannot suck… you either appreciate it, or you don’t! Melly get yourself together or I am personally coming over to slap some sense into you!

  8. Granny Weatherwax Says:

    Whom did you ask for an opinion?
    The biggest idiot of the world?

    shkosswg?

  9. Melantrys Says:

    [c]oma: Got a sword, me……

    Sis: No, you know I don’t talk to Mike anymore except if they blow up stuff in London…

    wetzn!!!

  10. Granny Weatherwax Says:

    The second biggest idiot, then…?

    stlrbsl???

  11. Caesar of Pentra Says:

    Was it so sick like my (Animal Party) :P And by the way it costs me 12 cents to send you an SMS.
    And if I wanna call you, it will cost me 30 cents per 1 min.
    Sounds reasonable somehow!
    Keep in touch!

  12. Melantrys Says:

    No, just… dunno. As soon as blogger allows it (couldn’t log in just now) I’ll put it back on, then you can see for yourself.

  13. David Says:

    Glad to see that the art is back on the wall! :) I don’t think that she will ever really stand alone. She has many friends who will stand with her! :)

  14. Caesar of Pentra Says:

    Aha, that’s the poem you were talking about! I don’t understand much in poetry though :I

  15. Granny Weatherwax Says:

    So you put it back up. Good for you!

    hnncyd?

  16. Frenzie Says:

    Biggest idiot in the world speaking, I suppose. XD

    I didn’t say it sucked, I just said I thought it was a little… whiney-sort-of. But then I’m generally a happy person of course.

    Anyway, lost my feeds, resubscribed. Rock on.

    nizsbqn to you all!

  17. David Says:

    As much as I enjoy reading your work of art over and over again, I wouldn’t mind moving on to the next room of your Gallery. :)
    You must be one hell of a googler! :P
    Yeah, I really hate it when octolegged vampiric parasites hitch rides without asking politely first! ;)
    Uxpaiu and onward to glorious victory!

  18. Melantrys Says:

    Well, I was working on one, but I needed the active help of some thorny personality to finish this. ;)
    Well, I did win the world (except for the icky parts and the swamps) for guessing where the nickname of one dude I was chating with came from. For that I used Google as well.
    Finding Niki was easier.
    But this reminds me… Drew, I still didn’t receive the prize. Do I have to sue you????

    About hitching a ride we might have been able to talk. It’s the drinking my blood I was so highly opposed to. And the fact that it didn’t present me any test results on whether it was suffering from Lyme disease or not.
    Ticks are just fucking disgusting!!!!!!

    rkgwmf - hey, you forgot your vowels….

  19. Tere Says:

    Precious cactus, is a pretty echinopsis, enhorabuena. Greetings from Spain.

  20. Melantrys Says:

    Well, well, well, Spain, eh? Welcome! :)

  21. attawie Says:

    I liked your art.–>

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